Thesis statement, Topic, Counter-argument sentences

Thesis statement Although supporters argue that mobile technology should be allowed to students in the classroom, it should be banned because the mobile technology interrupts other classmates who don't use it; it reduces the concentration of students; and it is not effective to the students' study. Topic senetences 1. The first reason that mobile technology should be banned is that the mobile technology interrupts other classmates who don't use it. 2. Secondly, because the mobile technology reduces the concentration of students, it should be prohibited. 3. In addition, mobile technology should be banned because it is not effective to the students' study. Counter-argument Some people suggest that mobile technology can be utilized as a good class material in the classroom.

Synthesis

   Many people don't agree that athletes should be allowed to take PEDs; however, the ways for prohibiting unclean athletes are various. Specifically, an arganization can be helpful to make sports clean by educating. Goodman(2012) states, "The hope is that through educating the participants, commissions and public on the hazards of performance-enhancing drugs, the benefits to competing clean will become obvious and ubiquitous" (para.5). As a result of this education, people will know the importance of clean competition. On the other hand, paying attention to clean athletes is sometimes better than focusing on unclean athletes. Bradbury(2012) reports, "Fines would be based on the spoils (including prize money and endorsements) of the competition and would be split among the athletes who pass the tests" (para.5). Then, clean athletes will be encouraged. In conclusion, many methods should be tried to keep athletes from taking drugs which improve their athletic perf...

Textbook p.115 (1 paragraph)

 People who experience life in a culture with a lower economic standard can learn some lessons about life. First, they can learn the way of happy life by seeing some people who are happy even though their environment is not positive. Specifically, people can live well in the home of which condition is not excellent, and this fact will give people a tip for the happy life. Second, when people realize that living in a culture with a lower economic standard is not comfortable, they may appreciate their own lives. For instance, if people encounter the slower speed of internet than in their countries, they will feel they are in  a pleasant life in their own countries. Consequently, experiencing life in a culture with a lower economic standard may be a valuable experience for people.

Thesis and 3 Topic Sentences

Thesis: The South Korea and China have both similarities and differences in the areas of dining etiquette, seniority and respect, and classroom expectations. 3 Topic sentences 1. Above all, both South Korean and Chinese culture has similartities and differences of etiquette during dining. 2. Another important feature of both South Korean and Chiness culture is the people's thinking of seniority and respect. 3. Last important similarities and differences between South Korean and Chinese culture are characteristics in the education.

Foreign Environmental Refugees

 It is not neccessary for governments of rich countries to help the foreign environmental refugees. The foreign environmental refugees can use their own resources from disaster. As Handwerk(2004) states, "The effects of a warming globe may not be entirely negative"(para.12). Environmental refugees appear because of disaster like ice metling from global warming, and they can take advantge of this terrible situation by using the heat. In addition, there are too many environmental refugees to be helped. Specifically, experts on migration says, "tens of millions more people in the developing world could be on the move because of disasters"(Kaklsiss, 2010, para 2). It is impossible that the governments cover all of these foreign environmental refugees because the resources are limited. Finally, the wealthy governments also have a lack of money. For example, the wealthy governments should use the money, even if it is a small amount of money, to improve their country for...

Summary of "Environmental Refugees Unable to Return Home"

 In the article Environmental Refugees Unable to Return Home by Joanna Kakissis, some experts state that because of the natural disasters, which are caused by getting worse climate, countless numbers of developing country's people move. Specifically, these environmental refugees gradually moves to big city to break away from desaster. In addition, unlike the past, their moves to Dhaka in Bangladesh is permanent in these days. It means that they can't go back to their home due to very serious disaster. However, many people live in slums in Dhaka, and the places are easy to meet global warming. To aid these people, several international organizations are trying. In conclusion, even though going back to home is the environmental refugees's dearest wish, they can't do it because they don't have proper resources.

Response (Nonfiction)

  One point that the writer claims is that the generator which is invented by Kamen is very useful in developing countries. This opinion is important in the way that it is a main idea of one paragraph in this article. Moreover, this mention is significant since it shows a reason for importance of the generator. I agree this reference because a small amount of electricity produced by the generator can improve the quality of life in developing world. This invention is good thing in developing world because the people who live there can have more free time and extend productivity in nighttime by using the electricity. Consequently, I think the idea notices that the generator is much more effective item in the countries which is developing, and I hope this Kamen's invention will be commercialized well in the near future.