Thesis and 3 Topic Sentences
Thesis:
The South Korea and China have both similarities and differences in the areas of dining etiquette, seniority and respect, and classroom expectations.
3 Topic sentences
1.
Above all, both South Korean and Chinese culture has similartities and differences of etiquette during dining.
2.
Another important feature of both South Korean and Chiness culture is the people's thinking of seniority and respect.
3.
Last important similarities and differences between South Korean and Chinese culture are characteristics in the education.
The South Korea and China have both similarities and differences in the areas of dining etiquette, seniority and respect, and classroom expectations.
3 Topic sentences
1.
Above all, both South Korean and Chinese culture has similartities and differences of etiquette during dining.
2.
Another important feature of both South Korean and Chiness culture is the people's thinking of seniority and respect.
3.
Last important similarities and differences between South Korean and Chinese culture are characteristics in the education.
Good work. There's no 'the' before South Korea. Watch subject verb agreement in your first topic sentence. 95
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