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  One point that the writer claims is that the generator which is invented by Kamen is very useful in developing countries. This opinion is important in the way that it is a main idea of one paragraph in this article. Moreover, this mention is significant since it shows a reason for importance of the generator. I agree this reference because a small amount of electricity produced by the generator can improve the quality of life in developing world. This invention is good thing in developing world because the people who live there can have more free time and extend productivity in nighttime by using the electricity. Consequently, I think the idea notices that the generator is much more effective item in the countries which is developing, and I hope this Kamen's invention will be commercialized well in the near future.

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  1. Language Trainer2017년 7월 18일 PM 3:53

    Good work here but I am not sure what the purpose of these two sentences are: "This opinion is important in the way that it is a main idea of one paragraph in this article. Moreover, this mention is significant since it shows a reason for importance of the generator. " You don't really seem to say anything here. 85

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